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Post by zachatree » 26 Oct 2004 19:20

any one else like to right poems? now and again i do, if any one else dose fill free to post some here i love to read them, i will be posting alot.


wispy smoke twisting rising rising rising, still.
a taste like flowers, like your hair
rolling tongues soften softer than anything
of such sweetness i could only have dreamed
but the dream is real, it happened it is happening
it will happen again, it is real.


EDIT:-- Justin Sane

^^^ opps sorry modified if i disapointed you, wasnt intentinal.
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Post by zachatree » 27 Oct 2004 13:13

She is the devil in disquise.
She knows how to hypnotize.
Stealing souls is her game.
She goes by the name of Cocaine.

She can make a good man steal,
An honest man lie,
A mother leave her children,
And none of them know why.

She can tear a family in two.
Take everything that belongs to you.
She has no feelings and does not care,
So, if you meet her, walk away.

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Post by Jeremy » 27 Oct 2004 15:16

Nice Zach!

I'm not really into writing much poetry but I read a bit. This is something I read recently and really liked. Having now read the whole poem - I like the last 5 lines a lot more than I like the rest of the poem

So when the last and dreadful hour
This crumbling pageant shall devour,
The trumpet shall be heard on high,
The dead shall live, the living die,
And Music shall untune the sky.

John Dryden

You can find the whole poem here:
http://www.poetry-archive.com/d/a_song_ ... s_day.html

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Post by zachatree » 27 Oct 2004 15:23

thanks jeremy i liked that alot here is something i wrote on the bus to day


you can fly high
you can fly low
you can kill
but it dosnt show
things move fast
things move slow
here and there they go
when will it stop?
when will it end?
when we get high
high again.

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Post by zachatree » 27 Oct 2004 15:49

it was in the room
it was too late
all i could do was suficate
what is there now
what else could i do
could i run
could i run
could i hide
could i hide
i could
i wont
death came slow
but it came for sirtien
till my breath
was all but broken
then noting
notingness


i just came up with one up i call it "The Pleg"

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Post by FlexThis » 27 Oct 2004 15:55

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Post by zachatree » 27 Oct 2004 16:03

:D

suns rise
suns set
moons glow
but yet
no one knows
what i see
when they rise
and open up there eyes
things become what they seem
Sheep in a pasture
cows in the night
the plant lets me know
every things gonna be al right

^ pulled out of ass.

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Post by lightningbolt » 27 Oct 2004 17:06

Wow Zach! I didn't know you were this.... I don't know the word for it but just wow.

Here mine and don't laugh, I not that good.

Deep inside the critzied
There a kid whos dead inside
He sits alone inside his room
And whene the sun raises outside and starts a new
So will he inside

^ That my sad ass atempt and I too 'pulled it out of my ass'!
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Post by HG » 27 Oct 2004 17:08

heres my ass pullage


turtle
green
shell
turkey
dumb
brain
america
sucks


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Post by zachatree » 27 Oct 2004 17:16

lol think of a tecno beat going really crazy beat and the lyris where... turtle.........green..........shell.........turkey.........dumb.......brain.......america......sucks......


that be so cool great one henry.

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Post by shaggster » 27 Oct 2004 22:12

zach were the first two yours, there were no spelling errors in them :?
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Post by zachatree » 28 Oct 2004 02:54

shaggster wrote:zach were the first two yours, there were no spelling errors in them :?

well thanks, thats bc i took my time, they where for school. and the only 2 words i didnt know i looked up disquise and hypnotize.

thanks for noticeing :roll:

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Post by HG » 28 Oct 2004 04:26

(quietly sneaks up behind Zach, slips him a note)

*disguise is spelled with a g not a q*


but thanks. i took about 10 seconds to write that poem. im gonna go make a techno song now
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Post by zachatree » 28 Oct 2004 04:59

Holy poop thanks for find the error hen, and im glad i inspired you.

im in english class right now, and i let my teacher read this thread, she laghed when she read you poem henry :lol:

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Post by Anz » 28 Oct 2004 07:59

Nice Zach!
Is abstract language allowed?


yksi, kaksi, kolme -
nelja, viisi, kuusi -
seitseman kahdeksan -
yhdeksan -
kymmenen


I could write a poem in english too... I'll give it a try but not now.

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Post by Tsiangkun » 28 Oct 2004 10:09

the elections been fixed
the proof is in florida
blank ballots count for bush
our democracy's over.

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Post by FlexThis » 28 Oct 2004 14:09

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Post by zachatree » 28 Oct 2004 14:20

Chillin flex

i wrote a few to day at school

there is no sensation to compare with this
a taste like flowers, a smell of sweet bliss
light travles slower, movment come to a standstill
am i dreaming? is this real?
did i do what i was trying
or did i only do half
it dosen't matter
noting ever matters
as long as i got the plants

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Post by Tsiangkun » 28 Oct 2004 16:00

right wing o' right wing
believe in so much crap
associations with sadaam
al quida and iraq
The truth has been written
evangelical christians have somethin' missin'
oh say can I see a crusader on a mission

listen to the man
the shogun and cameron
I see death between the lines
and bush's powerful plannin'
if the votes were counted right
both the towers would be standing
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Re: poems

Post by mattkain » 28 Oct 2004 16:48

zachatree wrote:any one else like to right poems? now and again i do, if any one else dose fill free to post some here i love to read them, i will be posting alot.

wispy smoke twisting rising rising rising, still.
a taste like flowers, like your hair
rolling tongues soften softer than anything
of such sweetness i could only have dreamed
but the dream is real, it happened it is happening
it will happen again, it is real.
Wow, that's a great example of plagiarism (a word which I am sure you would have trouble spelling), unless you intended to credit the author, and I somehow overlooked that part (takes a moment to look). Nope, doesn't appear that way.

http://www.erowid.org/chemicals/opiates/opiates.shtml

Keep smoking the weed Zach, I'm sure it makes it easier to at least fool yourself.

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