I guess I'm a poet

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I guess I'm a poet

Post by JFootbagger »

I wrote this in 3 minutes...tell me what you think :)

Feelings of Past Relations


Here I am again
from the beginning

affraid of losing
hope of winning

My hands are shaking
my heart is breaking
and doubt is over taking
my mind
my soul
my heart

I can't let myself fall apart

Things were easier when I got past
Things were better when I gave up at last

Turn time back, here I am
Shaking my head, going "oh damn"

Are things going to be different?
or just the same?

Get ready man...
ready for the pain...

[edit] but don't live in regret
for this is your chance
the time is near, this is it...
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Post by Samurai »

this emotion ure feeling is a part o f life.

its hard to let go of regrets and learn from our mistakes isnt it?

just dont give up, and write down the words

instead of holding it inside


keep it up master wong
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Started with sparse low lines, built intensity with rythmic variety, went to 16th note lines in high register, than went to octives, than block chords for my last chorus... If you understood that last sentance than you should be playing music and not checking the internet.
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Post by slapdash21 »

you should hit up poets.org :)
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