My First tripless run

[Eskimo Joe]

Please give pointers and tips or criticisms. I am very proud of this and would love to know any way that I could improve.

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v1W4E3BleUU[/youtube]

[calemccoy]

looks awesome..... but more of a link than a run, pretty short. make it longer!!!!!!! try hitting a blur after that, then rpt. ( i think that works)

very nice man, looked controlled. me gusta!

[dp]

Cool stuff. Make sure you work BOPs and guiltless before you start thinking all 4 add stuff, but I'm sure you are.

During your ripwalks you lean over a lot, if you straighten up your back it'll be more controlled and easier eventually.

[Muffinman]

Personally, I think it looks okay. Kind of as if you were at the level where you could repeat it after a blur with no problem. But I know you're not, so you should work more on your BOPs (and flip fairies!) like was suggested.

Also, to be nitpicky, you fairy set could be cleaner. I think that was mentioned in your fairy ducking osis thread. Try to dex more with your upper leg than your ankle (like sameside atomic). It looks okay, but it could be better. MOST people do sloppy, crappy, fairy sets, so the standard isn't as high as what it should be...


It's fun to watch your progress.
Keep it up! And props on the unique first 5!

[Benzilla]

Yeah, was a bit short for a run. Im sure in time you'll advance and it'll become easier and longer runs will come more naturally