Not bad for a first time, Jesse.
You should post a link to the BCS-Bob Log III vid I did, just to show how much you've improved (and grown) since then.
Some issues I had (on a technical note) with the film... you showed too many 'almosts' - too many drops. No offence, but we want to see what you can hit, not what you're close to hitting. Anyone can attempt big tricks - like me and mullet - but comming close doesn't really give an accurate guage on playing ability. You're a talented player with good style and a good book of tricks, don't bore us with drop after drop.
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limester816 said:
...and the transitions are the real main thing that stood out to me. Usually you dont use a whole lot of fancy transitions in videos like these- unprofesional in my opinion.
I assume he's talking about the titles you used ('The!' and 'Sloppy!'). I agree that it did affect the mood of the video. They didn't sit well and seemed to clash with the rest of what you produced. It would be better to establish the use of that style early and to run with it as a general theme throughout the video, or to not do it at all. Maybe just a more imaginative way of expressing your disapproval without the full screen title. Or maybe just cut all sloppy and the tricks/runs from your videos in future?
Quality is a hard one. I've been trying time, and time again to get an acceptable compromise between quality and file size, and it's hard. I think you did well for a first time. I think the quality was reasonably good, concidering.
I was impressed with you end credits, though not with your choice of colours. The animated boxes were cool but I think the red and orange clashed a little and didn't translate well. With videos you intend to post online, the fewer or duller the colours, the smaller the video. For example, if you were to make your whole vid B&W, you'll find you've saved alot of file space. One thing, though... with the credits, try to include everyone who contributed and give yourself more credit. It's good that you've given the song title and artist, but tell the audience who's playing again. Tell them who made the video.
Tell them it was you!
Credit where credit's due.
All up, a great job with the film, Jesse.
If you're up for a kick this weekend, let me know ASAP as to which day is best for you. I had a bad session on Monday, and I'm keen to rectify that by having an awesome one this weekend.
and just a word of improvment , it would be better to take out some of the drops , there kind of to many but HEY its your first video so it doesnt really matter , now you just know not to have as much in your next video. Keep on shredding man your gonna be a legend 
