Le Rap Battale 4
Le Rap Battale 4
ou eh le beat?
Last edited by Samurai on 06 Dec 2005 00:17, edited 3 times in total.
Shreddaily wrote:
Started with sparse low lines, built intensity with rythmic variety, went to 16th note lines in high register, than went to octives, than block chords for my last chorus... If you understood that last sentance than you should be playing music and not checking the internet.
You got rhymes to defend?
Shreddaily wrote:
Started with sparse low lines, built intensity with rythmic variety, went to 16th note lines in high register, than went to octives, than block chords for my last chorus... If you understood that last sentance than you should be playing music and not checking the internet.
Yo... Yo yo,
This topic sucks
I'm obviously the best, so just give me my 400 bucks
Yeah, thats right, I'm white and can rap better than you,
I freestyle, so I don't write lyrics like you do
Umh, yeah, footbag is fun
I do a tripple dex and then some
Nobody knows, better I'm faster than Vasek,
My shred is out of this world and galactic
Ravioli is the bomb
And to make it, I don't need help from my Mom
It taste wicked good
Everyone should love it, yes they should.
This topic sucks
I'm obviously the best, so just give me my 400 bucks
Yeah, thats right, I'm white and can rap better than you,
I freestyle, so I don't write lyrics like you do
Umh, yeah, footbag is fun
I do a tripple dex and then some
Nobody knows, better I'm faster than Vasek,
My shred is out of this world and galactic
Ravioli is the bomb
And to make it, I don't need help from my Mom
It taste wicked good
Everyone should love it, yes they should.
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Seath
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What is this a contest? Am I to confess my best?
Would you think less if I digressed or would that cause a mess?
If I relied on modified to describe my pride
and try to ally those to my side Would you run and hide?
You coincide with my spies. allies ready to die for my prize.
I win before we begin? Is that 4 bills in US or Canadian?
I guess american the best at arrogance,
willin to do anythin to tear a fence in the name of their defence.
I'm scared to go off topic, so I'll stop it, this contest needs more responses
with guidlines on how my rhymes can get sam to hand me four grand in dimes.
The Tofu crew's groove's smooth as a boat cruise
the good news is though you'll loose
news crews will focus on yous cuz everybodys amused by the boo that ensues.
Would you think less if I digressed or would that cause a mess?
If I relied on modified to describe my pride
and try to ally those to my side Would you run and hide?
You coincide with my spies. allies ready to die for my prize.
I win before we begin? Is that 4 bills in US or Canadian?
I guess american the best at arrogance,
willin to do anythin to tear a fence in the name of their defence.
I'm scared to go off topic, so I'll stop it, this contest needs more responses
with guidlines on how my rhymes can get sam to hand me four grand in dimes.
The Tofu crew's groove's smooth as a boat cruise
the good news is though you'll loose
news crews will focus on yous cuz everybodys amused by the boo that ensues.
gong singles shootin
signify your demise
hatred is somthin
that i wont dignify
signify your demise
hatred is somthin
that i wont dignify
Shreddaily wrote:
Started with sparse low lines, built intensity with rythmic variety, went to 16th note lines in high register, than went to octives, than block chords for my last chorus... If you understood that last sentance than you should be playing music and not checking the internet.
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BainbridgeShred
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- Joined: 10 Nov 2004 23:22
Aight check it
Seath happens to be my lackey, can't jack me
Even Iraqi's can't crack me, I'll smack you in the back B
I never slack see, which is why my poetry remains deep
Never sleep, 'cause when you sleep is when foolish kids creep
Into your crib, and not to see how ya live
They wanna take you, 'n shake you so ya better give
All ya got, so pop a squat 'n let's light this lot
It don't stop, you got shot up in my spot
Red dot, trained in on your brain
Now it's a blood clot 'n you face don't look the same
Sorry mayne, it's just the way it is when a dude's vexed
My rhymes a snipers bullet, so step up, who's next?
Just something I bullshitted off the top of my head.
Seath happens to be my lackey, can't jack me
Even Iraqi's can't crack me, I'll smack you in the back B
I never slack see, which is why my poetry remains deep
Never sleep, 'cause when you sleep is when foolish kids creep
Into your crib, and not to see how ya live
They wanna take you, 'n shake you so ya better give
All ya got, so pop a squat 'n let's light this lot
It don't stop, you got shot up in my spot
Red dot, trained in on your brain
Now it's a blood clot 'n you face don't look the same
Sorry mayne, it's just the way it is when a dude's vexed
My rhymes a snipers bullet, so step up, who's next?
Just something I bullshitted off the top of my head.
yo modified rappers aint seein no shame
I discharge my words with subliminal fame
1 , 2, 3, i throw down the bomb
while sucking on the clit of jerry springers mom
ill take you to the place where my homies rome
east side , west side , californias my home
ill see ya some day at the pearly gates
waiting for the man himself to give me first place
you chicken?
i think so
your words get tangled in your own fro
get a job man, get a life
sorry , words spoken , im with your wife
ohhhhhhh
heaven or hell its all temper minded
dont look at the light or prepare to be blinded
sam c , ryan s
i saw a video with them in a dress
so the moral of the story is not to distress
when the coolaxe drops the bomb your in for a test
i hear by declare me the best in the game
modified , i put you to shame
I discharge my words with subliminal fame
1 , 2, 3, i throw down the bomb
while sucking on the clit of jerry springers mom
ill take you to the place where my homies rome
east side , west side , californias my home
ill see ya some day at the pearly gates
waiting for the man himself to give me first place
you chicken?
i think so
your words get tangled in your own fro
get a job man, get a life
sorry , words spoken , im with your wife
ohhhhhhh
heaven or hell its all temper minded
dont look at the light or prepare to be blinded
sam c , ryan s
i saw a video with them in a dress
so the moral of the story is not to distress
when the coolaxe drops the bomb your in for a test
i hear by declare me the best in the game
modified , i put you to shame
15 year old Joe Kulacz
yo whatsup
i just got back from work
i got done servin food
to a bunch of jerks
who didnt tip for shit
but i still scraped in
just enough to continue
some sick BLAZIN
with a little extra
to pay the rent
thats how i start
and this is how i end
i just got back from work
i got done servin food
to a bunch of jerks
who didnt tip for shit
but i still scraped in
just enough to continue
some sick BLAZIN
with a little extra
to pay the rent
thats how i start
and this is how i end
Shreddaily wrote:
Started with sparse low lines, built intensity with rythmic variety, went to 16th note lines in high register, than went to octives, than block chords for my last chorus... If you understood that last sentance than you should be playing music and not checking the internet.
deep down,
in our hearts
we know we're
modfiied for life
and>right from the start
we'll be here for all time
communication is the nature
to achieve progress
to digress the bypass
my hands on
yo ass
a little too slow...
a little too fast
i swiped your heart
and your and wallet
oh, what? you thought there was something new?
you didnt know that i come with the ninja crew
i swiped your jugular too
whats that in your pants?
its ya doo doo
and if ya cool chick
then its me 2
ooo! psych
i only sleep with 1 girl at night
and shes and i are aieght
so what now?
you just got put down
in an expert fassion
a fade to black assasin
you're left in passing
your funeral mass
amaasing
i hit thin air
like your rims tear
im pimsleur
a hint of fresh air
like bodileurre
lesure suis leisure
a log cabbin in the sierre-uh
what?
i left you in the dust
just now, your rhymes rust
just cant come out
i am without a doubt
the winner of this bout
ill keep it short and stoute:
peace out
-i
in our hearts
we know we're
modfiied for life
and>right from the start
we'll be here for all time
communication is the nature
to achieve progress
to digress the bypass
my hands on
yo ass
a little too slow...
a little too fast
i swiped your heart
and your and wallet
oh, what? you thought there was something new?
you didnt know that i come with the ninja crew
i swiped your jugular too
whats that in your pants?
its ya doo doo
and if ya cool chick
then its me 2
ooo! psych
i only sleep with 1 girl at night
and shes and i are aieght
so what now?
you just got put down
in an expert fassion
a fade to black assasin
you're left in passing
your funeral mass
amaasing
i hit thin air
like your rims tear
im pimsleur
a hint of fresh air
like bodileurre
lesure suis leisure
a log cabbin in the sierre-uh
what?
i left you in the dust
just now, your rhymes rust
just cant come out
i am without a doubt
the winner of this bout
ill keep it short and stoute:
peace out
-i
Shreddaily wrote:
Started with sparse low lines, built intensity with rythmic variety, went to 16th note lines in high register, than went to octives, than block chords for my last chorus... If you understood that last sentance than you should be playing music and not checking the internet.
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BainbridgeShred
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- Posts: 2352
- Joined: 10 Nov 2004 23:22
16 bars for you fools. If rhymed I imagine this would be kicked pretty fast with not a lot of pause between bars. Think of a Big L type flow if you know of him.
I get at you gramatically, emphatically
Destroy foes fanatically, bone bitches automatically
'n handle me, it's an impossibility G
Don't believe me? Well you can ask Ryan Sea-
'n sure I said it, man you don't want it, don't try'n get it
I bet if, I got you in the choke you'd prolly get stiff
But that fish don't bite 'cause last night shit was hyped
Now that it's bright, you're alright 'cause ya got piped
But piped or griped I don't forget that easily
My rhymes are breezy B, just like Easy E
Which is probably why I stay so fly all the time
Whatchu want tough guy, better comply or die
'Cause when I'm high I'm like a Shangai Samurai
And am I a man if I, don't wanna fuckin' die
So I guess I'll end this with a big red cherry on the top
B-Shred's got the hottest fuckin' rhymes on the block
I get at you gramatically, emphatically
Destroy foes fanatically, bone bitches automatically
'n handle me, it's an impossibility G
Don't believe me? Well you can ask Ryan Sea-
'n sure I said it, man you don't want it, don't try'n get it
I bet if, I got you in the choke you'd prolly get stiff
But that fish don't bite 'cause last night shit was hyped
Now that it's bright, you're alright 'cause ya got piped
But piped or griped I don't forget that easily
My rhymes are breezy B, just like Easy E
Which is probably why I stay so fly all the time
Whatchu want tough guy, better comply or die
'Cause when I'm high I'm like a Shangai Samurai
And am I a man if I, don't wanna fuckin' die
So I guess I'll end this with a big red cherry on the top
B-Shred's got the hottest fuckin' rhymes on the block
yo dis is joe in da houseeeeee
*beat starts*
your pie incrusts your decomic crack
black and hairy put a censory shack i wont to hack
keep track , yo niggas cant deny this
im swinging in my flyah , start making a wish list
santas got some bitches waiting fo me
fuckem standing up or against da treeee
ryan seeeee
got nothing on meeeeee
rolling 3 g's , shootin dem peas
wait , dont masturbate
it kills a kitten everything escalates
opened up a colt 45 ,
some circuit in my head wants more for the ride
slide , pride , coconut boobies
watch out fo da gun they come out in wittle toobies
*beat starts*
your pie incrusts your decomic crack
black and hairy put a censory shack i wont to hack
keep track , yo niggas cant deny this
im swinging in my flyah , start making a wish list
santas got some bitches waiting fo me
fuckem standing up or against da treeee
ryan seeeee
got nothing on meeeeee
rolling 3 g's , shootin dem peas
wait , dont masturbate
it kills a kitten everything escalates
opened up a colt 45 ,
some circuit in my head wants more for the ride
slide , pride , coconut boobies
watch out fo da gun they come out in wittle toobies
15 year old Joe Kulacz
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shredzilla
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Haha yall dudes is crazy,
My style is lazy,
Yo what up ladies,
This ain't Slim Shady,
It's just another brotha up in here tonight
And what I don't put to pen, I spit on the mic
Word is bond son, my shit's trump tight
Don't even try to bite cuz the style will ignite
I'm so dope, I'll dis you just for fun
While you sit there stunned,
Cuz you can't cope with how dope that this was done
This is just for fun, got your girl sprung,
In the front row screamin "Chris gimme some!"
Stepped off stage and gave her some Christmas tongue
So sit tight, you'll be alright,
But me and homegirl goin home tonight.
My style is lazy,
Yo what up ladies,
This ain't Slim Shady,
It's just another brotha up in here tonight
And what I don't put to pen, I spit on the mic
Word is bond son, my shit's trump tight
Don't even try to bite cuz the style will ignite
I'm so dope, I'll dis you just for fun
While you sit there stunned,
Cuz you can't cope with how dope that this was done
This is just for fun, got your girl sprung,
In the front row screamin "Chris gimme some!"
Stepped off stage and gave her some Christmas tongue
So sit tight, you'll be alright,
But me and homegirl goin home tonight.
J. Chris "Thread-killer" Miller
yo those are two of the finest flows
ive ever heard
and i tried to understand
every other word
but i was only privy
too few of the meanings
every perspective
right down to the beatings
the breathing-in rhythm
like the sound of this beat
inspires my minds
to shuffle repeat
ive ever heard
and i tried to understand
every other word
but i was only privy
too few of the meanings
every perspective
right down to the beatings
the breathing-in rhythm
like the sound of this beat
inspires my minds
to shuffle repeat
Shreddaily wrote:
Started with sparse low lines, built intensity with rythmic variety, went to 16th note lines in high register, than went to octives, than block chords for my last chorus... If you understood that last sentance than you should be playing music and not checking the internet.