okay --now with verses

slapdash21 · Post by **slapdash21** » 22 Jan 2006 16:20

FOR CHRISSAKES, WE TOLD YOU ALREADY...ITS A SONG WITH NO BACKGROUND MUSIC/BEAT!!!!!!!!!

jeez!

come on...nobody thought this was even a LITTLE bit funny??

Tsiangkun · Post by **Tsiangkun** » 22 Jan 2006 18:16

I like the first verse.

I don't like the second, it's not what I want it to be. It needs redone.

I'll evaluate using more syllables, but I'm trying to do a specific style on this track.

It's supposed to be more of a narrative than a rap.

Laroche · Post by **Laroche** » 22 Jan 2006 19:11

Really nice man, I enjoyed it greatly. Mix could use a bit of work, but I know its unfinished so I wont comment on that.

Great vocals, I like the lyrics. Keep up the good work!

Jdigges · Post by **Jdigges** » 23 Jan 2006 08:56

Those are mad cool Tsiangkun. Do you have any other music up somewhere?

My bad, i just found your other tracks

Tsiangkun · Post by **Tsiangkun** » 23 Jan 2006 20:04

I don't really make songs or anything. On occassion I come up with a good loop and post it, or I'll get a good verse on tape and post it.

http://www.soundclick.com/tsiangkun