I got 24 contacts of The Box tonight

I do my shower different than my Box, though. I thought that the standard Box pattern was different from Jorden's, like, NOT synchronous tosses (unlike the Box). I do my Shower really fast, not synchronously, and I think that is why my flip shower is harder than the Box for me. I may be doing my Box wrong though. I showed it to my brother and he said it was cool, but I showed it to my mom, and explained ahead of time why it's called what it's called, and after she said she wouldn't have seen it if I hadn't explained. I'll post a video of all my tricks soon and hopefully someone can tell me how my form is.
I think, of the tricks in the video, I could do 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 7, and 8.
Since watching the video, I started on the patterns I had never done before, like the fake 1-up 2-up and the crossed reverse cascade (when Lauri told me to try this I was doing something else).
I'm excited to get to Mills Mess, but I realized that I really have to work on the consistancy of the tricks I can already do. I started doing some other 1-up 2-up patterns too, like one like columns, but you toss the middle ball all the way around the two repeatedly, and one where you toss the two alternatively on either side of the middle. I was also messing around with some other stuff (before I really started understanding how everything works), like spinning and ducking

They're both really hard, especially in my small room with low ceiling.
EDIT:
Here's a video of some patterns of which I question my style. Any tips for cleaning up some mess would be awesome. Oh and maybe tell me, too, if I'm not doing what I think I'm doing; so to that end I will list the tricks I mean to be doing in the video:
http://www.hackrifice.com/marita/060419juggling.wmv
1) REVERSE CASCADE
2) HALF SHOWER: It looks chunky -- not smooth enough?
3) SHOWER: I think this looks fine? But Jorden's was different, with synchronous tosses, so I'm not sure if I'm doing standard Shower?...
4) BOX: My back-and-forth toss (does this have a name?) looks like my hands are too close together and barely tosses (almost 'handing'); sometimes the balls don't go straight up -- I think I just have to work on that, but if my back-and-forth is bad, that will take a lot of work, I think

5) TENNIS: My left (flip) hand doesn't seem to move the same way as my right, I'm not sure if this makes too big of a difference. I find it really noticeable though...
6) CROSSED REVERSE CASCADE: This is like my second time ever doing this one. Does it look okay? Should I turn less to that one side? Am I tossing over far enough?
7) SHOWER: My first toss didn't include all three (oops). I'm not entirely sure how this trick works. In the demo I watched it includes an single rotation of cascade as part of the trick, but it didn't make sense, so when I usually try for consecutives I don't use the cascade. I'm not sure if I'm "seperating" the balls enough... I never really did this pattern since I used my footbags to juggle.

CHOP: Is it clean? I'm not sure about this one either...
9) EATING APPLES (a lighter variation): This is the one that I am most concerned about for style. My brothers say it looks very silly. My one brother said that it looks too SUDDEN, and not smooth enough, so the very last clip was me trying to smoothen it out, but it just feels way too different. The first attempt is what it looked like to me in teh java demo... I really want to know if it looks like it's supposed to...
Thanks!