1 year song

[JoFa]

good voices are for pussies.

take what you get and do your best with the voice you have.

the problem with the song isn't the vocals, the chord progession is just too boring.

the drum pattern works well for the style, but sort of clashes against the totally different guitar. i would suggest some sort of transitional phrase/sound that would get you accustomed the electronic sound instead of going straight in from the distorted guitar.

the guitar parts are good, i like that you're landing on seconds.
i like the vocal style. anyone who says that you're "out of tune" obviously doesn't realize that those parts aren't supposed to be landing on set pitches.

if you had a more unique progression it would be a lot better, but at this point i feel like after two listens i've gotten all i can out of it.

sounds good though. if you did make it longer then you could just consider the generic progression as a build up into a better chorus. but as it is it just sounds a bit bland.

good job over all, i like it.

[QuantumBalance]

Cool

[Bander87]

Dang, so much controversy.

[Robert wojci]

alright, props on actually making music, most people dont do that! but im more of a classic rock fan and i didnt like this so much. the guitar was cool, but it kind of sounded like so many other modern songs
vocals were ok..
solo right at the end was actually pretty sweet
nice producin

(please dont get mad at me!)

[QuantumBalance]

uh.... ok


its not like i got mad at everyojne who offered criticism...

[Splint]

Not a fan. I listened to it a couple of times to make sure I would be honest.
The guitar sounded very amateurish. The other musical parts sounded like they were ripped from the 80's hair bands and given a little raver kick. The vocals made me cringe.
Your ability to put the music together seemed...

[QuantumBalance]

"The other musical parts sounded like they were ripped from the 80's hair bands and given a little raver kick"

<3 !