Hi modifiers,
Here's a new vid of me. It's a bit short because i was so tired after schredding the whole last week. Don't care about the video editing. Just critize my game and give me feetback. A special thanks goes to david clavens who selled me one of his perfect bags!!
Thx a lot i advance for your feetback!!
Michael perny
Videolink: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7Osm3Ka_v_w
24.02.07
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Wow. Very impressive. Good variety. Very good form.
Criticism: I thought your form was very good on almost everything you did. The one exception, I thought, was your ducks. With all your ducks, you set the bag directly over your head. Eric Wulff, a world champion and the first real master of ducking and diving, said that a good duck should pass just over the NECK. I agree with him. I don't know if my ducks are any good, since I never video myself. But anyway, I think you should set your ducks a little bit further back to get them just over your neck instead of over your head.
This is not exactly criticism, but I assume its one of the things you're looking to hear: you have really good variety, alot of concepts. I think you could use some more double-downs. You know, like, single-leg double dexterity moves. I think I saw a barrage in there. Thats good. Now how about a paradon to go with it?
Anyway, keep up the good work. Very nice gyro stuff, by the way.
Criticism: I thought your form was very good on almost everything you did. The one exception, I thought, was your ducks. With all your ducks, you set the bag directly over your head. Eric Wulff, a world champion and the first real master of ducking and diving, said that a good duck should pass just over the NECK. I agree with him. I don't know if my ducks are any good, since I never video myself. But anyway, I think you should set your ducks a little bit further back to get them just over your neck instead of over your head.
This is not exactly criticism, but I assume its one of the things you're looking to hear: you have really good variety, alot of concepts. I think you could use some more double-downs. You know, like, single-leg double dexterity moves. I think I saw a barrage in there. Thats good. Now how about a paradon to go with it?
Anyway, keep up the good work. Very nice gyro stuff, by the way.
"The time has come to convert the unbelievers..."
Jonathan Schneider --- sometimes showers with his Lavers on (to clean them)
The Ministry of Silly Walks
NYFA
BAP
Jonathan Schneider --- sometimes showers with his Lavers on (to clean them)
The Ministry of Silly Walks
NYFA
BAP
Thx for your feetback! Yes when i saw my duckings the first time on video I thought the same like you
I have to set it a bit further back. Normally i try to do barfly or barrages and stuff like this, but my knee hurts because i schredded the whole week, so it was better not to do double dexterety moves. Thx for your post!
Michael
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Awesome stuff man. Just keep adding tricks to your game and you'll do great! 
Alan Underhill
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ok. i'm here. i think your game looks solid, but you should play guiltless. i believe that you could ! just eliminate far legovers by using pdx mirages instead of far legovers, and do the same thing with clippers. use butterflies instead of them.Michu wrote:Just critize my game and give me feetback.
try to stop playing when a bag unfortunately falls on your toe.
props on the fearless link and mobius.
Kamil Hucal