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Burma - BACK FOREVER

Post by burma »

I DO love your comments, guys =()
I DO love footbag life!

http://www.footbag.org/gallery/show/11670

if you've got some critics and TIPS (DC style please :D )
you are more than welcome!
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Post by SergeyKozlov »

Don't even finish to watch it...I'm glad I have a player to shred with, on the other part of a country! =) Have one more reason to visit Kazan now! =)

Nice!
Tips: more clipper - more better =)

priez*ai bots smotret' =)
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Post by david »

Cool dustpans.

Fairy on the phase was a little thin, but not terrible. Weird whirl, but I think it's ok. Nice trick.

Pixie gyro dlo is pretty cool. your pixie form is a little weird because you don't have walls, the dex needs to be higher up on your calf and more under your knee for it to look good to me, but a lot of people now do it like you. This is just me being pro-wall pixie.

Merlin looked thin if not the. Dex was too like, over the bag, it should be around it to clean it. With your swirls you want to have a more stable landing and make it less of a big dex. Bend your knee more when you land.

Pretty good fog form. The alpine atom looked beautiful, that was very well done. Your shuffle looks pretty good, nice arm position, nice straight back, well done.

On the ducking clipper you have bad form on one side. Your left foot is always leaning back on the hell, while your right (the good one, that i like) is on the toe. Be on the toe on both sides, it will look better. Also don't just like fall into the clipper after the duck, make it more of a hop into it.

Cool predators. The delusion looked alright. I was kinda weirded out by the later runs because of the light flash, thus I can't really talk to about whirl form cuz it was too jaggy and cut out.

Anyway, you have an alright game. You should learn spins and just make longer lines in general. I didn't see any osis tricks either, those might be good. Get walls and make your pixies look better. Keep working shuffle but make a solid base so your lines are long. Your toe stuff is pretty good and you look comfortable with it. Remember to stay on your toes for all tricks, and keep that good arm posture you have. And don't do that weird editing stuff. A nice tripod video with simple cuts goes a long way when your looking for advice.

Thanks for the video.

dc
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Post by Wiktor »

Good shred, keep shreddin`!
It seems you can get much better...

Really impressive, constructive criticism, Dave!

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wtf is pills11.com?
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Post by Cod »

david wrote:wtf is pills11.com?
It might be some kind of virus in Wiktor's computer :roll:. I've seen this pills11.com also in some Nick Landes' post...

About the video: I don't like the editing. This white flashes are totally useless and make the shred not comfortable to watch. But I really like your shred. The only thing I can suggest you is to show us some longer combos next time.
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Post by burma »

tnx to all for your advice (especially Dave!). It's very useful for me.
And forget about the flashes :) They just looked funny to me!
yo! :D
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Post by SergeyKozlov »

I like the flashes :)
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