Great rakes! And vortex was ill! I've been playing as long as you I can barely do rakes or drifters at all. I also like how you threw some illusions (they were deep and clean) and spinning clips in those runs.
I agree with Tom. Main thing would be to get rid of the toe bails. Create a challenge thread and ask for tiltless and low-end guiltless challenges.
Clipper > Pickup > Mirage > Legover > Illusion > RPT
is one of my fave tiltless drills. I didn't see a lot of flip clipper in this, so drills that drill flip clipper will probably help you out... although that first pdx whirl was with flip clipper?
Props to you for making a video and asking for critiques, it's not always easy get feedback. Keep shreddin'
