I think haikus are more than just about syllables. They're meant to reference the seasons or nature, and have some kind of juxtaposition in the last line. Something like;
Cold winter morning
shivering in my short shorts
Footbag warms me up.
Footbag Haikus
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DTank126
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Re: Footbag Haikus
Great Haikus everyone. Here's me at worlds:
Beer Beer Beer Beer Beer
Beer Beer Beer Beer Beer Beer Beer
Beer Beer Beer Beer Vom
Beer Beer Beer Beer Beer
Beer Beer Beer Beer Beer Beer Beer
Beer Beer Beer Beer Vom
Doug Tank
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krustykrakk
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Re: Footbag Haikus
Beginner shit sucks,
all I want to do is shred.
Someone teach me torque.
all I want to do is shred.
Someone teach me torque.