My first shred video

[TomTilly]

Hey all, I made my first real shred video. I'm quite amateur, but I think the vid is enjoyable I'm interessed about your opininon, so write all you mean about it.
Here is the link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rdP0ngyVteQ

[Shredinger Z]

Wow.. gooooooood vid!!!!

You have good basic drills, at least, the ss butterfly>infinity drill was consistent enough, and basic moves as paradox illusion, whirl, paradox mirage, ducking.. Congratulations for that!!!!

Also you have some great moves as torque, swirl, quantum mirage, sym. whirl, tomahawk!!

Really props for you, keep playing man!!!

[AbelFarkas]

Wow! I really liked it! The editing is simply, but perfectly fits to your style!
The music choise was also good!
Thanks for the vid
My favorite tricks were: clean dada curves, and leggy style atomsmasher fun trick!

[Eric Chang]

Suggest bringing your level back down a bit.

Sure you can hit infinity, but the style was hard to watch. Your hands are bouncing everywhere and it looks like you lack control, and trying too hard to hit even the butterfly. Or rather a lot of your moves seem to be choppy rather than smooth.

Do your best to fix that sunil toe.

Watch at 1:15 your right toe is like mine (I've been working on fixing it) that you crank your foot like a clipper rather than keep it straight, do you best to drop that habit.

Been watching the video a lot, and it looks like to me that you're not turning your upper body at all, not sure how exactly to explain it, but I am sure on of the better players will be able to help you out.

Props for hitting those big tricks, but I didn't see any flip sides to it, so that is always something to work on.

I did enjoy the close up camera angle of the double around the world, might try something like that.

Cheers, and clean somethings up and don't take offense to what I am saying.