Not bad. You're right on the one-sided thing, but there are many worse new players. Don't worry too much, just keep practicing it.
The biggest problem that I noticed is your posture. Every player has somewhat of a hunch, otherwise we wouldn't be able to see the bag. Your's, however, is more pronounced and will probably be detrimental to the development of your game. Also, it doesn't look good.
Mostly, just stand more straight up, and look down more with your eyes rather than your whole head.
Again, not bad. Just keep it up and I'm sure everything will even out just fine.
Jay (8:06:01 PM): Bu-bu-buu-buug--Looks up, and the feeling goes away like a sneeze-bu-buuuh-BULLLSHITTT
Jay (8:06:14 PM): *wipes bellybutton*